Darryl Vatter
Sunday, January 22, 2012
Is this a good prologue for my book?
It sounds good and it defidently makes me interested in the book...but i think it needs more detail...maybe when Kathy is laying in her bed...make her think about what happened and explain how Kendall went missing...then make Kendall appear
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